Today I plowed through my notes. I’ve been pondering this re-write (when not pondering arson) off and on for years. I have a lot of notes.
One thing I’ve noticed is I’ve got about…four attempts on Eve’s life in the first chapter. That’s insane! I don’t need to prove someone is after her–one would do that! No, this is a result of the kitchen-sink plot I mentioned–every time things slowed down, I had someone else try to kill her.
No wonder she’s paranoid. 
Ahh well. More tomorrow. And now to bed, and now to bed!
Heh, I’d say poor Eve, but I’m sure she deserves it ^_^
(also, yay arson)
I don’t know what you’re talking about. Eve is the epitome of Sweetness and Light. >_>