Liquid Silver, you can pick that nit anytime.
Here’s what she said in her lovely review of one of my fanfics, “I caught a little mistake in your use of German. In chapter 4, you let Schuldig say “Was ist das?” as the literal translation of “What is it?” (or so I assume). The correct phrase to use would be “Was ist los?” Not to come across as picky or anything, but your writing is so flawless and well-polished otherwise that I thought you might wish to know.”
Flawless? Well-polished? Ooh, I like the way she criticizes…
1,012 NaNo words today. Better than yesterday, but still not keeping up. I could be in trouble.Â