I made a yummy dinner with lots of vegetables in it tonight.
“You are what you eat,” explains the rest of my evening.
Well, it’s not that bad. I did send the first chapter of Flame to Race, and she’s very happy. (Yay!!) She asked for a bit more description, though, and I allowed that she was right. So I added about two hundred words here and there, and it helps.
Probably I should haul out the One-Pass Revision instructions again. I thought I’d absorbed them, but if I’m forgetting setting (ooh, rhyme!), then clearly not.
And if I’m not only rhyming, but letting it stand and then laughing at it, I clearly need to go to bed.